I think Dad's eyes need a little more shine to match the others, and a little more polish on their hair. Should we make Orange a distinctive orange colour to stand out a bit more? So the audience clicks straight away that "THAT'S the guy who keeps falling on his face!"
Bahaha i love the mustache on the dad. If you compare where orange and his dad's feet should end, the dad would have very short legs. Though i think its okay for this because orange needs to be central in the photo and he could have easily been standing on something... He seems like the type to give himself a height boost :P It looks great Brad!
The dad looks like Neil. Also, I know it's meant to be a sepia-toned photo, but I think you need more value difference between the clothes and the faces/hands. They just sort of look all the same because you've got really high contrast going with the shadows/highlights and it's a little off-putting. But otherwise, nice work. :)
I think Dad's eyes need a little more shine to match the others, and a little more polish on their hair. Should we make Orange a distinctive orange colour to stand out a bit more? So the audience clicks straight away that "THAT'S the guy who keeps falling on his face!"
ReplyDeleteThems me thoughts.
I think its obvious that its Orange but if we need to change it later, its easy enough.
ReplyDeleteI'll fix the other stuff as well
Bahaha i love the mustache on the dad.
ReplyDeleteIf you compare where orange and his dad's feet should end, the dad would have very short legs. Though i think its okay for this because orange needs to be central in the photo and he could have easily been standing on something... He seems like the type to give himself a height boost :P
It looks great Brad!
The dad looks like Neil. Also, I know it's meant to be a sepia-toned photo, but I think you need more value difference between the clothes and the faces/hands. They just sort of look all the same because you've got really high contrast going with the shadows/highlights and it's a little off-putting. But otherwise, nice work. :)
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